Sunsets Left As A Reminder – A Collection of Haiku Poems

1. Sunset on the rim

Of a horizon sit still

Wavering above

2. Sun that sits abides

Sphere eternal in essence

vitality lodge

3. Amber Jewel glow

Provides warm delicate touch

Bronzing everything

4. Illuminate being

Beams glimmer through trees despite

Diminishing glow

5. Copper source divine

Burnt orange embers sublime

Receding timeline

6. Majestic crown glow

Third eye projecting passions

The universe bless

7. Burning arrow rays

Depicts immortality

Reigning nirvana

8. Drift celestial

As we Gravitate towards

The guiding sunbeats

These original poems are written and copyrighted by Juana M. Gumbs. All rights are reserved by her in February 2021 (C)

Published by Hetheru Mer Djehuty

Re-born artist looking to share my soul expressions and imprint on those that visit for a while. View all posts by Hetheru Mer Djehuty

Published February 17, 2021March 10, 2021

Jae Davis says:

February 18, 2021 at 7:11 pm

Number 3 isn’t a Haiku! The word jewel is only one syllable. So the pattern is only 4, 7, 5! But…these offer some beautiful visuals.

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1. Jae Davis says:
  
  February 18, 2021 at 7:14 pm
  
  So I just did some research. Apparently jewel is acceptable as either one or two syllables depending on the dialect it’s spoken in. Therefore your haikus are perfect. Keep up the good work.
  
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  1. Hetheru Mer Djehuty says:
    
    February 18, 2021 at 8:36 pm
    
    Thank 🙇🏾 you! I’ll work on a few more projects with Haikus and sonnets.
    
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2. Hetheru Mer Djehuty says:
  
  February 18, 2021 at 8:38 pm
  
  Did you have a haiku from this collection that you particularly appreciated?
  
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